marine

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Portfolio for Writing IV,
Section 1c

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates yy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words)	website review Time to make soap!!	10/5	4	448	1	1	2	0
Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words)	Best 3 my favorite places	10/15	8	580	2	2	2	0
Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words)	What Mrs. Doubtfire tells me	10/29	6	511	13	1	2	0
Community life 08.11.17 (default length*)	How I communicate with my friends?	11/17	5	190	0	0	0	0
Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶)	Todoroki Suigen	12/01	5	296	0	1	1	1
Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶)	good points of the computer	12/15	6	147	0	0	1	0


Totals	---	---	34	2205	16	5	8	1

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	Posts in Preparation of Next Essays	10/31	16	question
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	★Birthday Present★	11/1	12
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	What Mrs. Doubtfire tells me	11/5	36	she wrote good points and weak points
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	Korean drama	12/19	13	question
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	12/19	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	15 words	answer
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	11/16 Kumanou festival	11/16	42	good she asked some question
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	11/24	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	29	answer appreciation

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]
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3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	BR01:stories of dogs	10/25	550	0
2-02	BR:2 Stories of Dragons	10/28	685	0
2-03	BR:3 Fairytale Castles	10/31	233	0
2-04	BR04-Love or money?	1/20	64	0
2-05	BR05-Remomber Miranda	1/20	187	0
2-06	BR-06 The Jumping Frog	1/23	65	0
2-07	BR-07 Curing a Cold	1/23	80	0
2-08	BR-08 The Jungle Book	1/24	93	0
2-09
2-10
2-11
2-12
2-13
2-14
2-15
2-16
2-17
2-18







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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	o
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	o
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	o
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	o
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	o
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	o
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	o
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	o
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	o
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)	o
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")	o
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	o
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	3	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. www (n) xxx (m) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	brainstorm (4) essay (5) portfolio (1) review (3)	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?	o
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?	o
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? ___ posts including photos or other graphics	15	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?	o
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?	o
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	2	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ... ... ...	1.movies	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yy.mm.dd) for reference. ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

... I attached movies and photoes for readers to understand the essayes easily
...There are some items in sidebar
...I added links of website

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it

Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

...It was difficult to customize my blog, but it was fun. I want to make it more colorful and easily to read and I want more people to read my blog.
...It was good that I introduced my hobbies and favorite things. Then many people tell me many favorite things. My favorite things went wide more.
... My tiping skill went good.

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

...Addition photoes and movies is good and make your blog colorful
...Coloring words makes your blog colorful
... Diary is good to remember your memory

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Notes:

This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).

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3 件のコメント:

Chie さんのコメント...: Hello! Marine. I saw your portfolio. You have finished almost, but book reviews haven't completed yet. Fight★; 2009年1月7日 10:53
Kaori さんのコメント...: Hi, Marine.

It's troublesome to write book reviews, isn't it? However u should finish them by the test week, maybe. Do ur best!; 2009年1月7日 11:01
marmie さんのコメント...: This is my first visit to your blog i guess. I'm Masami and my hundle is marmie. Nice to meet u.:-)
I checked your portfolio. Yap, it's almost finished, isn't it? But you have problems on your blog I think. You have better to posts more book reviews. You don't have to read some books which are difficult. I think it is okay you read a easy book and write about your first impression. Try!:-); 2009年1月7日 11:24