2008年5月28日水曜日

essay 4: Amusement Park

I went to Mitsui Green Land last summer, because I wanted to see Mr.Kojima yoshio. I went to the amusement park after the long time.

First, I got up early morning. I was very excited, because I can see the famous entertainer. I'm his fan. I wanted to see him. I went there with my younger sister by train. We entered at10:00 am, we ran to the space. He is very famous entertainer. I like him. There were a lot of gallery, so we couldn't take seats and watch him well. We were waiting him to show up for very long time, but he didn't show up to the stage. Finally, he appeared with his original song. The day was so hot, so I was very tired to wait. He talked funny things, and did his performance. His famous paformance is "Sonnano Kankeineeee!" It is very famous still now. When he did it, the audience bust out laughing at his gag. He wore only a swimming trunks, so he was impression. He talked good things. He said he came to Kumamoto for the first time. He praised of Kumamoto. He said Basashi is strange, because we eat raw meet of horse. I laughed again and again. I enjoyed his talking very much.
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After that, I went to the attractions. I like roller coaster, so I got one. Before I rode the roller coaster, my heart was beating fast. It was very fear, but I was excited it. I rode it many times. Next, my sister and I watched the Disney show. It was very interesting. It was a musical show. Many Disney characters showed up. I remember there were Peter pan, Snow White so on. Mickey and Minne were cute. Then, we got a area swing. when I was little, I liked it. I rode it very long time ago, so I was excited. It was good time. I enjoyed it like child.

However, unfortunately, it began to rain. So, we couldn't play with many attractions. We went to the game center, and played with them. My sister and I played "Taiko no tatsujin". It is to play Taiko to the music. I like it. We enjoyed it three times.

The rain was very hard. It wasn't stop, so we bought the rain courts. Some attractions were stopped to ride, so we rode some attractions we could ride. In the afternoon, we went back home by my mother's car. We were very wet. We enjoyed all the day.
ウエーブスインガーThe atractions I enjoyed. I have liked this atraction since I was little.
THis is the link of Mitsui Green Land http://www.greenland.co.jp/
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3 件のコメント:

Paul Beaufait さんのコメント...

Hi Marina,

From the Japanese in the title of your post (for an English writing course), I'm afraid you've misunderstood the minimum length required for your fourth essays. Instead of more than 400 characters long, they must be over 400 words in length. The Word Count tool in Microsoft Word counts both. This comment, for example, consists of 457 characters, but only 78 words. Your essay will need to be at least five times longer than this comment.

Kaori さんのコメント...

Hi Marina.
I also wanted to see Mr. Kojima Yoshio.
Was he a nice guy?

chisato さんのコメント...

Hi:)
I like his too. He is very fun. You are very lucky☆ I want to see him.