2008年7月14日月曜日

BR11 Blad Pit

I read a book about Blad Pit. I like Blad Pit because he is handsome.

He was very famous among girls in his high school. He had a girl friend.
When he graduated the high school, he went to college to be actor.
He was brave man. I think he was the most popular in high school. He was famouse among boys too.
Since he was an actor, he had some girlfriends who were actress. He was very famous. And he succeeded in movies. 84words

2 件のコメント:

Paul Beaufait さんのコメント...

Hi, Marina.

It's late at night, but I still have two plus pointers:

1. Strive to spell book titles and people's names correctly.

2. Add word counts to every post.

One more: Please share this advice with your classmates and peers.

Marina O さんのコメント...

Thank you for comments. I had mistakes of people's name. I think I was so tired then. Oh, It is just an excuse! I will make my blog better. Thank you:)